这个是我学的: (应该和你们不同)
1)和职位不相称的技能不用写
2)只说明, 不用解释优点
3)别说缺点(如没有经验)
Dear Sir/Madam,
Post for
With reference to your advertisement in " ", I would like to apply the post for " ."
2. I am a male, aged 17 and I lived in Chongqing.I have obtained a Degree of Foreign Language in Chongqing Technology and Business University.
3. I am a responsible, creative and thoughtful person besides good communication and organising skills. I will try my best to adapt to the environment and improved myself all the time.
4. As requested, I am enclosing a copy of my curriculum vitae and photostat copies of my Diploma certificates.
I look forward for an interview at any time convenient to you.
Thank you.
Yours faithfully,
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这个是你要求的:
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am a graduate of Chongqing Technology and Business University(School of Foreign Languages and Literature). I am very interested in working with your company. I am very active,optimistic and sincere towards others. I am also a responsible, creative and thoughtful person. My communication and organising skills were greatly enhanced when I was the head of organising division in Student's society besides the cultivation of team spirit. These are my valuable assets.
I might not have much experience since I am new to the society. However, I am hardworking. I will try my best to learn and adapt to the environment and job, keeping myself improved. I hope that I would be part of your company, so that I could work together with companions to create a better tomorrow.
It doesn't matter whether you would select me but I hope that you would appreciate my sincerity.
Yours sincerely,
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