我好久没写过作文今天无聊给你写了一个水平刚及格吧，呵呵，切莫采用。因为我的英语真的很菜。
As with the Internet developed,online shopping is quietly becoming the most common manner of consume.people like sitting in front of a computer for seeking goods.the goods on the page are so many that people can make his best option.it is convenience to buy what you like just by clicking the mouse.and in about three days,the goods will come to your hand.
however,the trouble followed with its convenience is the unsafety.by online shopping,you may leak your personal message such as your identity number and your password of credit card.whats worse,you have to suffer the danger of the money in your card being stolen.
in my opinion,id like to buy goods in traditional shops where i can bargin with the retailer and practise my skill of communion.