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 In 1713, Alexander Pope began his translation of the Iliad, a work that, taking him seven years until completion, and that literary critic Samuel Johnson, Pope’s contemporary, pronounced the greatest translation in any language.

(A) his translation of the Iliad, a work that, taking him seven years until completion, and that literary critic Samuel Johnson, Pope’s contemporary, pronounced

(B) his translation of the Iliad, a work that took him seven years to complete and that literary critic Samuel Johnson, Pope’s contemporary, pronounced

(C) his translation of the Iliad, a work that had taken seven years to complete and that literary critic Samuel Johnson, Pope’s contemporary, pronounced it as

(D) translating the Iliad, a work that took seven years until completion and that literary critic Samuel Johnson, Pope’s contemporary, pronounced it as

(E) translating the Iliad, a work that had taken seven years to complete and literary critic Samuel Johnson, Pope’s contemporary, pronounced it

答案解析如下：

(A)his translation of the Iliad, a work that, taking him seven years until completion, and that literary critic Samuel Johnson, Pope`s contemporary, pronounced

【错误】平行结构：“and”后方连接的是“that”引导的从句，“and”前方也应有如此的结构，但“and”前方的“that”引导的是“, taking him seven years until completion”，并非从句，“and”前后不平行。

(B)his translation of the Iliad, a work that took him seven years to complete and that literary critic Samuel Johnson, Pope`s contemporary, pronounced

【正确】 “that took him seven years to complete”和“that literary critic Samuel Johnson pronounced the greatest translation in any language”正确地用“and”平行在一起，共同作为定语从句修饰“a work”，“a work”作为同位语修饰“Iliad”，修饰关系准确合理。

【大意】 1713年，Alexander Pope开始翻译“Iliad”，这项(翻译)工作花了他七年完成，并且被Pope同代人文学评论家Samuel Johnson成为任何语言中最伟大的翻译。

(C)his translation of the Iliad, a work that had taken seven years to complete and that literary critic Samuel Johnson, Pope`s contemporary, pronounced it as

【错误1】 动词时态：“had”引导的过去完成时表示“过去的过去”发生的事，然而“had taken seven years”并不应该是“began his translation”之前发生的，因此本选项误用过去完成时。

【错误2】 修饰成分：“and that literary critic Samuel Johnson, Pope`s contemporary, pronounced it the greatest translation in any language”(“pronounce X Y”意思是把“把X宣称为Y”)是修饰之前“a work”的定语从句，其中的“it”即为“a work”，这违反了定语从句的使用规则，因为“a work”已经被关系代词“that”指代，无需再使用“it”重复指代，比方说“《哈利波特》是李喜欢的一本书”应写成“Harry Potter is a book that Li likes very much”，而不应写成“Harry Potter is a book that Li likes it very much”。

(D)translating the Iliad, a work that took seven years until completion and that literary critic Samuel Johnson, Pope`s contemporary, pronounced it as

【错误】修饰成分：见(C)中【错误2】。

(E)translating the Iliad, a work that had taken seven years to complete and literary critic Samuel Johnson, Pope`s contemporary, pronounced it

【错误1】 平行结构：由日常逻辑，“and literary critic Samuel Johnson, Pope`s contemporary, pronounced it……”和之前“that”引导的定语从句共同修饰“a work”语义更佳，而优于“and”后没有“that”且“pronounced”后方出现“it”，导致“literary critic Samuel Johnson, Pope`s contemporary, pronounced it……”成为了一个与主句“Alexander Pope began his translation of the Iliad”平行的结构，表意逊于(B)。

【错误1】 动词时态：见(C)中【错误1】。

【最优解题思路推荐】

只有(B)正确使用了“that……and that……”定语从句平行且修饰“a work”的结构，其他选项要么定语从句出错，要么破坏了这种平行结构，因此选择(B)。

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