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题目：

Some people suggest that young adults should be encourage to do some unpaid jobs for the community, do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages for young people and the community? 有人建议我们应该鼓励年轻人做义务的社区服务，是否认为利大于弊?(经典旧题，年轻人做社区服务的利弊)

雅思题库中类似题目：

Unpaid community service, such as teaching local children sports skills, working for local charities and improving neighborhood relations, should be a compulsory part of secondary education. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 社区服务，例如教授孩子们体育技能，或者为慈善团体工作，或者是提高社区关系，应该成为中学教学大纲的一部分，是否认同?

Young adults should undertake unpaid work to help people in the community. To what extent do you think it brings more drawbacks to the community and the young adults than benefits? 年轻人应该被鼓励去做社区服务，是否认为弊大于利?

雅思(托福)高分作文特征：

1. 题目为中心：一定明确回答问题，清晰论证问题

2. 逻辑为纲要：一定要有清晰的谋篇布局

3. 词汇为亮点：一定要选择精准，个性和多元的写作词汇

4. 句型为基础：一定要用符合学术英语写作的固定句式

立场：年轻人应该被鼓励去做义务的社区服务，因为这对于年轻人和社区都有利好。

思路拓展：

鼓励年轻人做社区服务的利好：

1. 在服务社区过程中，年轻人会加深对于社会的洞察，学习如何有效地和人交流交往，积累相关的工作经验， 这些都可以为年轻人未来的择业打下了坚实的基础。

2. 从精神成长的角度而言，年轻人做社区服务，尤其是帮助孤儿院的儿童或者是老人院的老人，有助于培养一个人的爱心，责任心，同情心，进而使人有一种积极善良的心态。

3.年轻人做社区服务，可以给社区带来直接的帮助，缓解他们的工作压力，也起到了示范的作用，鼓励更多的人帮助社区。

年轻人做社区服务的弊端：

1.鼓励年轻人做社区服务可能会分散学生们的精力，耽误他们的学习时间，甚至成为一些孩子们贪玩的借口。

2. 各种社区服务也是有严格工作要求的，如果一些年轻人们缺乏社区服务的知识，那么他们的工作不是帮忙，反而是添乱。

原创范文赏析：

首段：背景介绍 + 争议焦点 + 立场

It is a common practice that young students in numerous countries are required to embark on a period of voluntary community service work. However， peoples’ views differ greatly on this practice. To voice my opinion, those who are in the formative years should be motivated to undertake glorious community work, yet, its possible downsides should be emphasized

二段：鼓励年轻人做社区服务的利好的展开：

Granted， seen from the positive aspects, some merits could be gained via encouraging young students to be involved in unpaid community service. The most glaring virtue is that those who assume the responsibility of community work could learn how to care about others and provide concrete assistance. Meanwhile, it will enhance their sense of social responsibility and cultivate their loving hearts. Still, one’s co-ordination ability, teamwork spirit and management ability could be promoted during the process of serving the community. Eventually, as for many city-born young people, it is the experience of community service that makes them become independent, sociable and cooperative.

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