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2020年GRE出国考试写作经典范文赏析(4)
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2020年GRE出国考试写作经典范文赏析(4)

GRE考试备考过程中,好的习题能够达到事半功倍的效果。下面是帮考网带来的历年真题练习内容,供大家学习。

lies at the center of our universe, that time and space are relative concepts, that matter consists of discrete particles, that humans evolved from other life forms, to name a few. One current area of unusual research is terraforming-- -creating biological life and a habitable atmosphere where none existed before. This unusual research area does not immediately address society\\'s pressing social problems. Yet in the longer term it might be necessary to colonize other planets in order to ensure the survival of the human race; and after all, what could be a more significant contribution to society than preventing its extinction?

从题目的另外一个点着手,idiosyncratic" and "unusual,举出相应的事例来证明自己的观点,写的非常干净利索。

Those who would oppose the speaker\\'s assertion might point out that public universities should not allow their faculty to indulge their personal intellectual fantasies at taxpayer expense.

开始进行反击了,列出了几个可能的被进行攻击的方向出来先,然后从这个点上展开自己的进攻。典型的以子之矛攻子之盾。这个鬼子作者孙子兵法学的不错不错。

Yet as long as our universities maintain strict procedures for peer review, pure quackery(江湖术士) cannot persist for very long. Other detractors might argue that in certain academic areas, particularly the arts and humanities, research and intellectually inquiry amount to little more than a personal quest for happiness or pleasure. This specious argument overlooks the societal benefits afforded by appreciating and cultivating the arts. And, earnest study in the humanities affords—个人很喜欢afford在这里的用法,大家

感觉一下--- us wisdom to know what is best for society, and helps us understand and approach societal problems more critically, creatively, and effectively. Thus despite the lack of a tangible nexus between certain areas of intellectual inquiry and societal benefit, the nexus is there nonetheless.

In sum, I agree that we should allow academic scholars nearly unfettered freedom of intellectual inquiry and research within reasonable limits as determined by peer review.

重申观点坚决表达了自己对speaker的支持,是个非常好的同志。而且同时也给了对这个interests的一个reasonable limits,是一个相对比较隐晦的两面结合的手法。

Engaging one\\'s individual talents in one\\'s particular area of fascination is most likely to yield advances, discoveries, and innovations that serve to make the world a better and more interesting place in which to live.

最后喊了个口号来做了个结尾句。这个句式很不错,值得借鉴。

来个小结,这个文章写的非常干净利索—这个词我已经说了大概3遍不止了在这个文章里面,但是这个确实是我看了这个文章的感觉。够漂亮。而且逻辑线索非常的明显,文章写的也很有力度,事例的证明,引用很充分也恰倒好处,多一分罗嗦少一分就感到不足了。而且句式灵活多变,语言能力尽在行文中体现出来。这个文章值得55--6分。如果考虑到TESTING TIME,这个文章应该毫不犹豫的被判6分满分。

有的时候,听大家都说创新,说一般的行文也不够吸引眼球,但是如果可以把最普通的写作手法也运用的非常娴熟,我想你的分数自然也不会低到哪里去。就好象这个作者一样,连接词也都是最普通的first, second, moreover, etc,但是却写的干净漂亮,自然,句子之间/ thoughts之间的连接转换非常的smooth。所以,基础还是最重要的,忽视基础一味追求新有时候不见得是件好事情。

这些是angeikim个人看法,大家都来说说自己的想法吧,说的多了,讨论的多了自然也都有长进和提高了。要一点一点的来,也不要怕别人说。看我到现在还不是一样被人说水平臭,但是俺就不怕,一样的说自己想说的,因为交流当中自己从别人那里得来的是最impressive的,真正的会被吸收进入脑子变成自己的一部分。J瞎说了这么多,也别说我麻烦。看多了,也来说说,也说说别人,大家都来互相帮助吧,这样寄托才会变得更好,我们也会变得更强,一起真正实现自己的梦想。

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